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Summary: A story of love, fear and obsession. A teen taking care of a vampire, a pastry chef taking care of a deaf teen, and a waiter taking care of a keeper. All of their stories tie together and intertwine to create enemies and friends.

Rated: T (for future violence and whatnot)

Warnings: Men loving men, boys loving vampires, and a man loving a young man. He's 16-17 through out the story, and nothing hard core between the two.

IMPORTANT!!: I do not like Twilight, so it is NOT the reason I like vampires. c: Just so you know.

Thank you!

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Prologue:

Erik sat up breathlessly, and glanced to his side. There his ‘Landlord’ lie, sleeping soundly. But he felt something, something in the quiet, cold room he was resting in. He let his lungs rest themselves as he looked at the far armrest of the couch.

The room wasn’t very dark, there was a dull glow from the streetlights outside, but the figure on the end-table was black as coal. There was no face, no eyes, only the silhouette of a gorilla head on a twisted and crude body.

In essence, a shadow.

Taking a breath and reaching over Henry, Erik managed to turn on the lamp.

And the shadow was gone.



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End Prologue


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It was short because it's a prologue.

And because I can access this at school, I hope that I can update as often as it comes. The first chapter is already started.
©2009-2010 *phantom4muah
:iconphantom4muah:

Author's Comments

I have been pending on if I really wanted to put this on the Internet. It has been a diary of my own fears and hatred, put into a story and set free among characters not quite of my making. They came, in dreams, just as the horrors came from nightmares and half-awake hallucinations. I hope anyone that may stumble upon this will search their own levels of fear, to reach their own levels of freedom.



You can also find it here: [link]


And as I can't get on dA from school or dads house (I'm dangerously close to getting caught here, I have to hurry this), fictionpress is the only place that will get frequent updates. (As frequent as they get....)

Thank you. c:

~Nae'Ka

Preview Image done by: :iconzestysama:,
and can be found here: [link]
The red-brown haired one is Erik and the blonde is Henry.

:)

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:iconzestysama:
I just read this on fp a little bit ago! Like I said before I'm so happy to finally get to read this!

I hope no one catches you, that would be bad.

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Yaoi/bl fangirl with limits and guidelines.

Are you ready for this? [link]
:iconphantom4muah:
LOL!! I've been hiding it, too scared I suppose. :p It's like my baby....


Is it okay to hate the main character?

It's not Erik or Henry, it's Adrian....

I really don't like him for some reason. I've tried to change his story, to make me like him, but it doesn't work...

Hur... oh well. XDDDD

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Me: I will NEVER forgive you! ... But I will forget... So remind me. :|

"Yaoi: It's cannon because the fangirls say it is."
:iconiluv-garysmith-bully:
Very kewl. XD I like how at the beginning you added that you don't like Twilight.

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"You're very much welcome." I say it alot. It doesn't make the one I give you any less true.

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:iconzestysama:
But now it's like showing you baby to the world! Just don't do what Michael Jackson would do and drop it out of a window :D

Dude! If you absolutely hate the main character you should scrap him completely and start from scratch. Because even if you don't feel emotionally attached to your characters you should at least like them enough to want to write about them, you know?
But if you don't want to do that (or can't because you're writing it now) then my suggestion would be to change him as best you can then grin and bear it. Who knows, he might end up being your favorite character when all is said and done ^_^ (I hated Lunar at first but now he's my all time favorite OC :XD:)

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Yaoi/bl fangirl with limits and guidelines.

Are you ready for this? [link]
:iconphantom4muah:
I say that with every thing I -I HATE TWILIGHT~~~~~!!!!!!!- do, you know....

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Me: I will NEVER forgive you! ... But I will forget... So remind me. :|

"Yaoi: It's cannon because the fangirls say it is."
:iconiluv-garysmith-bully:
XD Yeah, I get ya. [link]

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"You're very much welcome." I say it alot. It doesn't make the one I give you any less true.

I'm Franke Athens in the deviantART Psychonauts Crew

How to get more pageviews: [link]
:iconphantom4muah:
XDDD

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Me: I will NEVER forgive you! ... But I will forget... So remind me. :|

"Yaoi: It's cannon because the fangirls say it is."
:iconphantom4muah:
D: MJ is CREEEEPAH!!

No. I think that it is good to have a character you don't like. And I think that he is too important to the story, especially his personality. It kinda draws everything together.

I made Erik and Henry more important in the series, because I love them both so much. And I REALLY love their story. >____< I think that is bad. (mary-sue wise)

Needless to say, though, I would never want their living arrangements with out someone living with me....

-cough- T.M.I.... oops. :p

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Me: I will NEVER forgive you! ... But I will forget... So remind me. :|

"Yaoi: It's cannon because the fangirls say it is."
:iconzestysama:
Ok, I see.

I love them both too and I don't even know anything about them lol. They're just so cute.

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Yaoi/bl fangirl with limits and guidelines.

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